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~KiNg KrAzY~ got A NEW Verse Here...Postin this Up In HERE Strictly to get feedback and advice on ways to tighten flow wordplay punches etc etc etc.....Honest Feedback MUCH APPRECIATED!!!....FAVOR Always Returned...


~*~Mulisha~*~(nough said).....Look.....Understand beatin me's a MIRACLE PUNK consider this a LYRICAL PUNCH/cause I'm BUSTIN DUDES NECK/Go Head SPIN THE WHEEL BEGIN A DEAL either way mark a LOSS DOWN not from MOSCOW/but facin KrAzY's like playin RUSSIAN ROULETTE/trust it's TEMPTIN ta AIM but also SIMPLE n PLAIN/verbal shots hit ya TIMPLE n BRAIN guaranteed ya DIMPLES will STAIN/like FACE MAKE-UP/Trust this QUEER LOVER's gone need 'SHEER COVER' when I TUCK THE SHANK FUCK YA RANK/iss obvious the "letsbeef" PLACE HATES YA!!!!/there's no DEBATE BRUH/it's PLAIN FOLKS this LAME JOKE needs to GROW DEM NUTS holes GO-IN UP/now watch as KiNg escaLATES SLUGS!!!//


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~KiNg--OUT~

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~*~MIC~*~MELTIN~*~MULISHA~*~ --Undisputed * Cypher * King--
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" UNDISPUTED " _ * CyPhEr * _ !@ KING @!

Battles= CHALLENGERS???

>>>_SIR_>>>"sorry... you can hate me or whatever but i'm going to duck that topical cuz i just can think of anything and really don't wanna do it anymore"<<<_SIR_<<<
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~KiNg KrAzY~ got A NEW Verse Here...Postin this Up In HERE Strictly to get feedback and advice on ways to tighten flow wordplay punches etc etc etc.....Honest Feedback MUCH APPRECIATED!!!....FAVOR Always Returned...


~*~Mulisha~*~(nough said).....Look.....Understand beatin me's a MIRACLE PUNK consider this a LYRICAL PUNCH/cause I'm BUSTIN DUDES NECK/Go Head SPIN THE WHEEL BEGIN A DEAL either way mark a LOSS DOWN not from MOSCOW/but facin KrAzY's like playin RUSSIAN ROULETTE/trust it's TEMPTIN ta AIM but also SIMPLE n PLAIN/verbal shots hit ya TIMPLE n BRAIN guaranteed ya DIMPLES will STAIN/like FACE MAKE-UP/Trust this QUEER LOVER's gone need 'SHEER COVER' when I TUCK THE SHANK FUCK YA RANK/iss obvious the "letsbeef" PLACE HATES YA!!!!/there's no DEBATE BRUH/it's PLAIN FOLKS this LAME JOKE needs to GROW DEM NUTS holes GO-IN UP/now watch as KiNg escaLATES SLUGS!!!//


ONE LOVE n ++++RESPECT++++



~KiNg--OUT~

~Legit Records CEO~

~*~MIC~*~MELTIN~*~MULISHA~*~ --Undisputed * Cypher * King--
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" UNDISPUTED " _ * CyPhEr * _ !@ KING @!

Battles= CHALLENGERS???

>>>_SIR_>>>"sorry... you can hate me or whatever but i'm going to duck that topical cuz i just can think of anything and really don't wanna do it anymore"<<<_SIR_<<<
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