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Unread 07-22-2010, 04:54 PM
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Flow could be a little better, but that's just the inexperience. Aswell as the delivery, and pressence. Be more fluent, and comfortable while you're spitting, and you should start to zero in on what you're trying to do.
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Flow could be a little better, but that's just the inexperience. Aswell as the delivery, and pressence. Be more fluent, and comfortable while you're spitting, and you should start to zero in on what you're trying to do.
 
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