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Unread 04-09-2010, 12:18 AM
Step S Step S is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
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14 Won / 10 Lost
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2 Won / 0 Lost

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305 Won / 71 Lost
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15 Won / 5 Lost
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Originally Posted by Jason View Post
well the way i see shit nowadays..
isnt so much who had the most punches anymore
originality is probably the most important thing in a battle.. and that goes for more then just punches. the originality of the words you choose to rhyme is also very important

Sandborn:
your entire verse consisted of bars like this:

Boy I'll spit these LINES THAT'LL BREAK THIS MAN, I would let you keep your LIFE IF I GAVE A DAMN
He got -fists?- then I'll -knock him around- and when I put -shot in the ground- I ain't TRYING TO MAKE HIM DANCE!/

the same boring type of rhyme scheme rhyming words that've been rhymed a million times with a very mediocure punch at the end that ive seen many times

and its vs something like:
ingers STINGIN WIT' BLOODY KNUCKLES ... all I NEED IS THE TRUSTY MUZZLE, bullets SPREADIN LIKE SANDSTORMS that WET THIS GUY SANBORN (sand born), and LEAVE 'EM A MUDDY PUDDLE,

which rhymed very unique words that flowed fairly well with an original, direct, and pretty hard hitting punch

so where this battle might seem close "punch wise"
i think it was pretty clear that he won this battle because he was more original all around
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Unread 04-09-2010, 12:18 AM   #18
 
Step S Step S is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.24/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
14 Won / 10 Lost
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2 Won / 0 Lost

Estimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.81/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.81/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.81/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
305 Won / 71 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
15 Won / 5 Lost
 
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jason View Post
well the way i see shit nowadays..
isnt so much who had the most punches anymore
originality is probably the most important thing in a battle.. and that goes for more then just punches. the originality of the words you choose to rhyme is also very important

Sandborn:
your entire verse consisted of bars like this:

Boy I'll spit these LINES THAT'LL BREAK THIS MAN, I would let you keep your LIFE IF I GAVE A DAMN
He got -fists?- then I'll -knock him around- and when I put -shot in the ground- I ain't TRYING TO MAKE HIM DANCE!/

the same boring type of rhyme scheme rhyming words that've been rhymed a million times with a very mediocure punch at the end that ive seen many times

and its vs something like:
ingers STINGIN WIT' BLOODY KNUCKLES ... all I NEED IS THE TRUSTY MUZZLE, bullets SPREADIN LIKE SANDSTORMS that WET THIS GUY SANBORN (sand born), and LEAVE 'EM A MUDDY PUDDLE,

which rhymed very unique words that flowed fairly well with an original, direct, and pretty hard hitting punch

so where this battle might seem close "punch wise"
i think it was pretty clear that he won this battle because he was more original all around
Ctrl C
Ctrl V On Microsoft Word

I See, I See.
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Discovering atrocities worst than Aristotle
Subjecting children to sodomy
Your theory of the galaxy is primitive like Ptolemy

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