Ask the people that voted. i never said i was a master of wordplay but they loved it. here's some other one that ppl liked.
expected bars but i aint HEARD ONE FA ME. i'm the best-emcee-to-hush-a-sound..i'll MURK SON FOR FREE! I'm da ruler, "get sent-a-meter/centimeter underground" before you "meaSURE UP TO ME". I'll "drop this vet" born a "rotten egg" you BIRD, SHUT YA BEAK. Think we're F.R.I.E.N.D.S..get "Hit With Mags" and end up "In The Cast"..thats how you WORK UP A SCENE!
i got a ton and im not the flawless battler, nobody is but it is what it is..ppl loved that shit...
i was actually really feelin my first 16 line battle on this account too...
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=304600