pretty decent drop fam... i cant leave an expo in the chypher cuz im on my phone but ill drop u a lil feed here... u got some ok concepts and aight imagery in dis shit but u need to use mutiple syllable rhymes instead of single syllable rhymes meanin instead of rhymin one word or one syllable words at a time rhyme mutiple words or syllables... and make sure ya multis match in syllable count and in pronouciation... overall, ok shit fam... SMACK!!
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