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Unread 01-14-2020, 08:28 PM
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As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain

BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!

PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables

The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.

A stretch is more like

Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT

Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch

IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
The stretch here is an example of slant rhyming using assonance. As a part of a multi with a lot of syllables this is commonplace and imo it’s fine, but in a short multi like the example it’s pretty lazy in a text battle.
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Unread 01-14-2020, 08:28 PM   #22
 
Kiwi Peewee
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Zezmeril View Post
As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain

BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!

PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables

The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.

A stretch is more like

Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT

Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch

IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
The stretch here is an example of slant rhyming using assonance. As a part of a multi with a lot of syllables this is commonplace and imo it’s fine, but in a short multi like the example it’s pretty lazy in a text battle.
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