i would wanna elevate as well too man, as i already told you earlier my prob is with the old structure that i am used to which used to be pun/wordplay heavy rather than multis and complexity, so i am here on letsbeef to be able to balance it all and be able blend all aspects to assist me with writing for a few projects i got running. with that said kindly assist me with ur feedbacks on the following which is my latest stuff as of now -
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=512069