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#5 03-13-2018, 02:34 PM

thought one focused too much on sounding intricate which unfortunately made the piece dull. Held my attention for 2-3 paragraphs. Also, use of brackets are weird in these pieces considering they only contain info not essential to the main story.. ultimately meaning it doesnt have to be read, and if one decides to skip the bracketed lines, it fucks up the flow.

03-13-2018, 02:34 PM

thought one focused too much on sounding intricate which unfortunately made the piece dull. Held my attention for 2-3 paragraphs. Also, use of brackets are weird in these pieces considering they only contain info not essential to the main story.. ultimately meaning it doesnt have to be read, and if one decides to skip the bracketed lines, it fucks up the flow.

03-13-2018, 02:34 PM	#5
Row Guest Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: n/a Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s)	thought one focused too much on sounding intricate which unfortunately made the piece dull. Held my attention for 2-3 paragraphs. Also, use of brackets are weird in these pieces considering they only contain info not essential to the main story.. ultimately meaning it doesnt have to be read, and if one decides to skip the bracketed lines, it fucks up the flow.