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**Shodan** · #5 03-07-2018, 02:50 PM

Bwahaha nice anagram bud. I should've caught that before you pointed it out.

Overall, a dope piece. There wasn't much to be said about your take on the concept, which was fairly obvious, but the execution was insane. The long one-scheme stanza was just nuts, even though some awkward phrasings leaked in, e.g. "enraged with his pompousness" - why would he be enraged with his pompousness, of all things? It also flowed decently throughout, but not buttery-smoothly.

I'd give it an 8.5/10.

**Shodan** · 03-07-2018, 02:50 PM

Bwahaha nice anagram bud. I should've caught that before you pointed it out.

Overall, a dope piece. There wasn't much to be said about your take on the concept, which was fairly obvious, but the execution was insane. The long one-scheme stanza was just nuts, even though some awkward phrasings leaked in, e.g. "enraged with his pompousness" - why would he be enraged with his pompousness, of all things? It also flowed decently throughout, but not buttery-smoothly.

I'd give it an 8.5/10.

03-07-2018, 02:50 PM	#5
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