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Unread 02-09-2018, 06:54 PM
KG The Prince
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Tha writer, in terms of his topic, added that twist of being born into something wrong and quickly becoming what they didn't want to become. E.g. "who had passed the torch to me.
I gave my life to a fiery circle of souls" --> this was a stand out for me, for incorporating that he was
initially being forced to do this when really he was using tha fire as a guidance for himself.
Tha whole write-up was nicely written, a bit sketchy in some parts, but overall it was really good. Shame tha opponent didn't turn up.
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Unread 02-09-2018, 06:54 PM   #7
 
KG The Prince
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Tha writer, in terms of his topic, added that twist of being born into something wrong and quickly becoming what they didn't want to become. E.g. "who had passed the torch to me.
I gave my life to a fiery circle of souls" --> this was a stand out for me, for incorporating that he was
initially being forced to do this when really he was using tha fire as a guidance for himself.
Tha whole write-up was nicely written, a bit sketchy in some parts, but overall it was really good. Shame tha opponent didn't turn up.
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