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Unread 02-09-2018, 02:11 PM
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Both had a decent flow, 11's wording was cleaner throughout and ultimately had the read that resonated more because of it. 2 was telling more of a story but it was executed poorly due to holes in the writing.

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Both had a decent flow, 11's wording was cleaner throughout and ultimately had the read that resonated more because of it. 2 was telling more of a story but it was executed poorly due to holes in the writing.

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