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Unread 02-09-2018, 01:23 PM
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I got the feel that the piece was in the perspective of someone in a group who do bad things, someone who committed acts only to have regret for them. It was a good but obvious approach on the picture at hand,

Some vocab wasn't used effectively in this piece and the rhyme scheme was odd, but at least was consistent.
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I got the feel that the piece was in the perspective of someone in a group who do bad things, someone who committed acts only to have regret for them. It was a good but obvious approach on the picture at hand,

Some vocab wasn't used effectively in this piece and the rhyme scheme was odd, but at least was consistent.