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Unread 12-23-2017, 07:41 AM
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punches win battles but wording is right behind. Plenty of text heads piss me off...they use 7 syllable multis, plenty of quotes and attempt to punch conceptually but when you read it out loud it either doesn't make sense, doesn't resemble a battle verse, or it's something nobody would ever, ever say except to make that punch work.
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Unread 12-23-2017, 07:41 AM   #9
 
Esso
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punches win battles but wording is right behind. Plenty of text heads piss me off...they use 7 syllable multis, plenty of quotes and attempt to punch conceptually but when you read it out loud it either doesn't make sense, doesn't resemble a battle verse, or it's something nobody would ever, ever say except to make that punch work.
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