[Seul]

Honestly, I wouldn't listen to this in real. So I don't look like a douchebag, here's why:

1. Missing sauce completely. There was no sauce to that video, first impressions matter.
2. Bars were okay, but honestly not anything blowing my mind.
3. w/ so much competition, you gotta put it into perspective; is this better then what I have been hearing lately from my peers? What makes "THIS" stand out above the rest?


I wish you all the luck, and I am sure over time you will improve. I hope my criticism was more constructive than anything else.


-Seul

[Seul]

Honestly, I wouldn't listen to this in real. So I don't look like a douchebag, here's why:

1. Missing sauce completely. There was no sauce to that video, first impressions matter.
2. Bars were okay, but honestly not anything blowing my mind.
3. w/ so much competition, you gotta put it into perspective; is this better then what I have been hearing lately from my peers? What makes "THIS" stand out above the rest?


I wish you all the luck, and I am sure over time you will improve. I hope my criticism was more constructive than anything else.


-Seul