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Originally Posted by Aggo
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Aggo. Whats good pimp. Just judging off of this verse, you had some dope lines. The AL Gore closer was nice. The main thing i see here is your use of filler lines, without completely maximizing the box. When i saw your name i was going to say heavyweight, due to the bars i saw in the Tag, but seems as tho you are just a hair short as well. Try throwing more punches, losing some of the filler. Just judging off this verse. Still a very solid verse. Also your wording could use a lil work to ensure that it reads smoothly like the Al Gore punch was very close to heavyweight just the wording didnt work both ways, if that makes sense.
Overall you are a very solid MIDDLEWEIGHT, on his way to heavyweight as well. Seems like the trend here, guessing most of you guys were in the same elevation crews. Holler at me for more help on the matter, ive gotten lots of people over this hump i.e cats like Illokwent.
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Originally Posted by Esso
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Lol. you do know that was an open i posted and wrote in like 5 min right? basically saying im retiring from texting lol
You get middle weight status for that shit... bhahahaha
Nah man. Decent verse here, didnt think that was your best verse tbh. There were some haymakers thrown as well, and you do a great job with wording. Ive read a lot of your verses, and what stands out to me are your concepts. You are creative, and throw a good amount of punches. Only thing i'd say you could work on is finding your own style, and swag. Once you find that you could be more than just a regular heavyweight.
You are a Heavyweight, have been catching bodys on the regular, and had a very solid LBT run.
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Originally Posted by Jimmy Hoffa
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Lockhart. This verse was dope af. People are sleeping on you man. Your ability to string together punches, personals, etc is dope. You threw some relevant haymakers in here like the closer. There are lots of quotables here, and the personal edge along with the wording, coupled with the punch consistency, and the structure of the verse make you good. Only thing i'd say you need to work on is finding your own personal swag, same as esso. You both have the fundamentals down, good concepts, and you are in fact a HEAVYWEIGHT. Ive watched you climb for awhile now, and you don't get the love you deserve. Maybe you can show us all why i call you a heavyweight with this next LBT run.
Ez.