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**The Ghost of Freak** · #4 10-15-2015, 02:46 PM

@Punk ... 1. I got to agree with @Student on sticking with a name... I personally like Punk, but also got a bias ... Izzy Reef isn't bad either.

2. Another music video with some nice camera work of you rapping in epic New York places, and adding some unexpected elements, effects, costumes, etc.... might be real attention grabbing. (I'm thinking JayZ's Empire State of Mind, Lil Dickey, Das Antwoord, etc... get creative, but also represent your place)

3. Make your lyrics more narrative based, of course Maria did that pretty well, but I'm thinking you should be pushing the envelope on that one ... I felt the wolf song showed off your delivery and rhyming talent, but you need a few songs that have even clearer of a narrative

**The Ghost of Freak** · 10-15-2015, 02:46 PM

@Punk ... 1. I got to agree with @Student on sticking with a name... I personally like Punk, but also got a bias ... Izzy Reef isn't bad either.

2. Another music video with some nice camera work of you rapping in epic New York places, and adding some unexpected elements, effects, costumes, etc.... might be real attention grabbing. (I'm thinking JayZ's Empire State of Mind, Lil Dickey, Das Antwoord, etc... get creative, but also represent your place)

3. Make your lyrics more narrative based, of course Maria did that pretty well, but I'm thinking you should be pushing the envelope on that one ... I felt the wolf song showed off your delivery and rhyming talent, but you need a few songs that have even clearer of a narrative

10-15-2015, 02:46 PM	#4
The Ghost of Freak Ranked Audio Record 124 Won / 135 Lost Ranked Text Record 22 Won / 29 Lost Join Date: Oct 2011 Voted: 481 audio / 231 text Posts: 1,066 Mentioned: 560 Post(s) Tagged: 27 Thread(s)	@Punk ... 1. I got to agree with @Student on sticking with a name... I personally like Punk, but also got a bias ... Izzy Reef isn't bad either. 2. Another music video with some nice camera work of you rapping in epic New York places, and adding some unexpected elements, effects, costumes, etc.... might be real attention grabbing. (I'm thinking JayZ's Empire State of Mind, Lil Dickey, Das Antwoord, etc... get creative, but also represent your place) 3. Make your lyrics more narrative based, of course Maria did that pretty well, but I'm thinking you should be pushing the envelope on that one ... I felt the wolf song showed off your delivery and rhyming talent, but you need a few songs that have even clearer of a narrative __________________ ...and I love you too.
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