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#19 08-31-2015, 11:29 AM

@Shodan That is exactly the point I am trying to make. You honestly believe that some of your shit that you write now will even come close to translating in a live battle is absolutely insane. Your wording in a lot of areas is so absolutely horrid that even you have problems conveying what you mean in your bars. You do have the concepts for it, but you honestly need to fix your wording before you even come close to live-battling. Why is it you think that I continuously beat you? It's not because of concepts because you're the more creative one. It's the fact that I can convey my concepts in a cleaner fashion, have better wording, and make them hit better than you can. This alone is the reason why you can't seem to beat any sort of "big name" you come up against (Wonderbred, Obey, Row, Bleu, Myself, etc.). You even lose battles to people you should absolutely dominate because of how you can't convey your concepts effectively. If you want to take this is as unfair criticism and me trying to deter you from live battling, then go ahead, but I promise you won't win any live battles if you keep making the same mistakes you make here. People will automatically dismiss you because they won't know what you're talking about because it will sound like YOU yourself don't know what you're talking about.

08-31-2015, 11:29 AM

@Shodan That is exactly the point I am trying to make. You honestly believe that some of your shit that you write now will even come close to translating in a live battle is absolutely insane. Your wording in a lot of areas is so absolutely horrid that even you have problems conveying what you mean in your bars. You do have the concepts for it, but you honestly need to fix your wording before you even come close to live-battling. Why is it you think that I continuously beat you? It's not because of concepts because you're the more creative one. It's the fact that I can convey my concepts in a cleaner fashion, have better wording, and make them hit better than you can. This alone is the reason why you can't seem to beat any sort of "big name" you come up against (Wonderbred, Obey, Row, Bleu, Myself, etc.). You even lose battles to people you should absolutely dominate because of how you can't convey your concepts effectively. If you want to take this is as unfair criticism and me trying to deter you from live battling, then go ahead, but I promise you won't win any live battles if you keep making the same mistakes you make here. People will automatically dismiss you because they won't know what you're talking about because it will sound like YOU yourself don't know what you're talking about.

08-31-2015, 11:29 AM	#19
Lockhart Guest Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: n/a Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s)	@Shodan That is exactly the point I am trying to make. You honestly believe that some of your shit that you write now will even come close to translating in a live battle is absolutely insane. Your wording in a lot of areas is so absolutely horrid that even you have problems conveying what you mean in your bars. You do have the concepts for it, but you honestly need to fix your wording before you even come close to live-battling. Why is it you think that I continuously beat you? It's not because of concepts because you're the more creative one. It's the fact that I can convey my concepts in a cleaner fashion, have better wording, and make them hit better than you can. This alone is the reason why you can't seem to beat any sort of "big name" you come up against (Wonderbred, Obey, Row, Bleu, Myself, etc.). You even lose battles to people you should absolutely dominate because of how you can't convey your concepts effectively. If you want to take this is as unfair criticism and me trying to deter you from live battling, then go ahead, but I promise you won't win any live battles if you keep making the same mistakes you make here. People will automatically dismiss you because they won't know what you're talking about because it will sound like YOU yourself don't know what you're talking about.