[Lizman]

Originally Posted by -ANONYMOUS-

I think Lizman was in point as far as the topic provided, however i got lost in all the vocabulary sounded too forced. Now paris on the other hand had some nice thoughts and deliered a nice read. Could go either way. Thought paris did a little more here. Voted 6-5

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Originally Posted by Row

one had the vocab but didnt really try to relate to the readers which is a selfish approach. look like a bunch of words together that painted no picture but a dictionary. Feel like one was more sympathetic untimately resulting in holding the attention of his readers by smoother rhymes and linguistics more prevalent in everyday speech. vote's for paris

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Originally Posted by Black Book

Alright, it boils down to this. PARIS had a good idea; he just didn't fully execute it. It was left a little ambiguous. It could have been executed a little better. He had decent rhymes and flow to it, nothing that really hurt him. Then Lizman had good multi's and it was a smooth read. The vocab was good but appeared so randomly with less advanced words surrounding it that you get the feeling he just put it in there to put it in there. From a technical standpoint, he won this battle, but topically, he did not. There was no clear point to all of his rhymes. And a topical is designed to convey a point or tell a story; neither of which were accomplished by him. So while Lizman was better with the devices of a topical, PARIS was better at what is the true essence of a topical.

VOTE: PARIS

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[Lizman]

Originally Posted by -ANONYMOUS-

I think Lizman was in point as far as the topic provided, however i got lost in all the vocabulary sounded too forced. Now paris on the other hand had some nice thoughts and deliered a nice read. Could go either way. Thought paris did a little more here. Voted 6-5

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Especially Things That Have To Do With Text.
I Think You Made That Clear When You Voted On A Text Battle.

---------- Post added at 05:57 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:56 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Row

one had the vocab but didnt really try to relate to the readers which is a selfish approach. look like a bunch of words together that painted no picture but a dictionary. Feel like one was more sympathetic untimately resulting in holding the attention of his readers by smoother rhymes and linguistics more prevalent in everyday speech. vote's for paris

I Understand Where You Coming From.
However Its Completely Untrue.

If You Want To Broaden Your Topical Peninsula Pm Me And I Will explain To You The 4 Perfectly Combined Themes That Were Illustrated In My Topical.

---------- Post added at 05:58 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:57 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Black Book

Alright, it boils down to this. PARIS had a good idea; he just didn't fully execute it. It was left a little ambiguous. It could have been executed a little better. He had decent rhymes and flow to it, nothing that really hurt him. Then Lizman had good multi's and it was a smooth read. The vocab was good but appeared so randomly with less advanced words surrounding it that you get the feeling he just put it in there to put it in there. From a technical standpoint, he won this battle, but topically, he did not. There was no clear point to all of his rhymes. And a topical is designed to convey a point or tell a story; neither of which were accomplished by him. So while Lizman was better with the devices of a topical, PARIS was better at what is the true essence of a topical.

VOTE: PARIS

I Have No Respect At All For You So Will Not Ever Tell You The Excellent Theme Behind This.