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**S O U L R I T E** · #2 05-16-2015, 10:23 PM

@NOBLE I got a boner after staring at her bro lmao

But nah on a serious note, I like it a lot. I kinda feel the rope behind her head shouldn't have been blurred to such a level. Blurs like that help distinguish depth of field, or depths in general. And for the rope to be blurred, despite her position in relation to it (back straight, pressed against it). Or maybe the rope isn't blurred and they're just that color. Idk. I'm a novice lol what do I know? The idea was good but I think the effect was overdone a tad bit. Other than that I like it! The shadows are awesome, and I like the name placement. It's clean, yet still sinister.

**S O U L R I T E** · 05-16-2015, 10:23 PM

@NOBLE I got a boner after staring at her bro lmao

But nah on a serious note, I like it a lot. I kinda feel the rope behind her head shouldn't have been blurred to such a level. Blurs like that help distinguish depth of field, or depths in general. And for the rope to be blurred, despite her position in relation to it (back straight, pressed against it). Or maybe the rope isn't blurred and they're just that color. Idk. I'm a novice lol what do I know? The idea was good but I think the effect was overdone a tad bit. Other than that I like it! The shadows are awesome, and I like the name placement. It's clean, yet still sinister.

05-16-2015, 10:23 PM	#2
S O U L R I T E Ranked Text Record 66 Won / 25 Lost Exclusive Text Record 4 Won / 2 Lost Join Date: Oct 2014 Voted: 23 audio / 240 text Posts: 301 Mentioned: 115 Post(s) Tagged: 1 Thread(s)	@NOBLE I got a boner after staring at her bro lmao But nah on a serious note, I like it a lot. I kinda feel the rope behind her head shouldn't have been blurred to such a level. Blurs like that help distinguish depth of field, or depths in general. And for the rope to be blurred, despite her position in relation to it (back straight, pressed against it). Or maybe the rope isn't blurred and they're just that color. Idk. I'm a novice lol what do I know? The idea was good but I think the effect was overdone a tad bit. Other than that I like it! The shadows are awesome, and I like the name placement. It's clean, yet still sinister.
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