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Unread 12-31-2014, 02:29 PM
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It's not even about ebonics though (for the most part) If you gonna use ebonics it has to atleast not be blatanty shoehorned in as replacement because you can't think of the correct rhyming word to fit the syllable count and concept. I.E

"I'm 25, you 15? that's a DISASTEROUS RECIPE! wrong punchline and them CATS IS ARRESTIN ME

Then it gets even worse and this isn't even a form of ebonics. it's just a straight up brain cramp.

"ATTRACTIVE, Uh, SEXUALLY!!/"

I new he was going to say SEXUALLY. The Uh is supposed to be suggestive of taking another angle. but because the angle is so obvious it doesn't work and it didnt even need to be there so sticks out as nothing else than what it was, a desperate attempt to even the syllable count.

And you know what. I din't need to LOOK for it. it's obvious right off the bat.
No, it's CATS IS UH-RESTIN ME
ATTRACTIVE, UH, SEXUALLY! He takes the beginning of ''A-rrest'' and uses the Uh for that syllable. Looking to deep into it. He did put an extra syllable on the beginning though.
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It's not even about ebonics though (for the most part) If you gonna use ebonics it has to atleast not be blatanty shoehorned in as replacement because you can't think of the correct rhyming word to fit the syllable count and concept. I.E

"I'm 25, you 15? that's a DISASTEROUS RECIPE! wrong punchline and them CATS IS ARRESTIN ME

Then it gets even worse and this isn't even a form of ebonics. it's just a straight up brain cramp.

"ATTRACTIVE, Uh, SEXUALLY!!/"

I new he was going to say SEXUALLY. The Uh is supposed to be suggestive of taking another angle. but because the angle is so obvious it doesn't work and it didnt even need to be there so sticks out as nothing else than what it was, a desperate attempt to even the syllable count.

And you know what. I din't need to LOOK for it. it's obvious right off the bat.
No, it's CATS IS UH-RESTIN ME
ATTRACTIVE, UH, SEXUALLY! He takes the beginning of ''A-rrest'' and uses the Uh for that syllable. Looking to deep into it. He did put an extra syllable on the beginning though.
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