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**Obey** · #1 12-22-2014, 05:27 PM

Posted it a month or so ago, but didn't get much feedback. It'd be cool if some of youse could check it out, maybe tell me what needs to get fixed quality wise and how to do so. How the lyrics are working and etc... I'm looking to get more into the track side but need some sort of guidance/help.

**Obey** · 12-22-2014, 05:27 PM

Posted it a month or so ago, but didn't get much feedback. It'd be cool if some of youse could check it out, maybe tell me what needs to get fixed quality wise and how to do so. How the lyrics are working and etc... I'm looking to get more into the track side but need some sort of guidance/help.

12-22-2014, 05:27 PM	#1
Obey <Turnbull AC's> Rookie Champion Ranked Text Record 137 Won / 56 Lost Exclusive Text Record 1 Won / 1 Lost Join Date: Nov 2012 Voted: 9 audio / 317 text Posts: 2,907 Mentioned: 1083 Post(s) Tagged: 35 Thread(s)	First Track - Need feedback. Posted it a month or so ago, but didn't get much feedback. It'd be cool if some of youse could check it out, maybe tell me what needs to get fixed quality wise and how to do so. How the lyrics are working and etc... I'm looking to get more into the track side but need some sort of guidance/help.
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