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Unread 12-03-2014, 07:00 PM
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It's not original man, think outside of the box If you call me a ''let me use your bathroom guy.'' in a battle I'm going to drop the microphone, squeeze a hot shit onto the microphone and then win the battle. You need to think better concepts, not to be mean but..
im not gonna waste good material for an example obviously..

I got bars and concepts
I need to know how to properly structure them though

lb structure is so weird if you went to another site
with it you'd get crucified

any other site its structured in bar form

like this it looks neater and flows smoother

See Dizaster in Philly I was on blocks a lot
Hustling on corners selling pot and rocks a lot
Until niggas started hating dialing the cops a lot
Im not fucking Canabis but yall know though
Only thing Cass will pull out in a battle is a .44
Tell that goofy ass nigga Lush to have Cass check
I been ripping niggas since the days of Cassettes
Diz an angry bitch screaming cuz she on the cycle
Cass give straight bars get yo trash ass recycled

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Unread 12-03-2014, 07:00 PM   #3
 
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.32/10 stars
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Obey View Post
It's not original man, think outside of the box If you call me a ''let me use your bathroom guy.'' in a battle I'm going to drop the microphone, squeeze a hot shit onto the microphone and then win the battle. You need to think better concepts, not to be mean but..
im not gonna waste good material for an example obviously..

I got bars and concepts
I need to know how to properly structure them though

lb structure is so weird if you went to another site
with it you'd get crucified

any other site its structured in bar form

like this it looks neater and flows smoother

See Dizaster in Philly I was on blocks a lot
Hustling on corners selling pot and rocks a lot
Until niggas started hating dialing the cops a lot
Im not fucking Canabis but yall know though
Only thing Cass will pull out in a battle is a .44
Tell that goofy ass nigga Lush to have Cass check
I been ripping niggas since the days of Cassettes
Diz an angry bitch screaming cuz she on the cycle
Cass give straight bars get yo trash ass recycled

The Hustler
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Pardon My Back!




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Daylyt, Hollow, Charlie Clips, Head Ice, Loaded Lux
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