LB got me CLOWNIN THE HOE,POUND HIM WIT BLOWS,No 'checkers' but we'll see 'Black get Red' once we battle it OUT "ON THIS BOARD"/
How the hell does Hoe and Blow rhyme with Board? Even with your accent, it doesn't rhyme.
Ill come for Black-Stripes,he ain a BEAST WIT THE SAVAGE LINES,his bars give us the 'Zzzzz,bruh',we can SEE IT IN "BLACK N WHITE"/
He gives us the Zzzzz, bruh? Like he gave us the letter Z? The concept you were going for was decent, but you should have at least set it up a little better.
See Lock beat em,the HOMO IS VERY WEAK,we all saw that 'white boy swing' like the 'LOGO OF MLB'
This isn't even a punch directed at him. You don't even reference him (Black Book) whatsoever except for the beginning part, and then you go and reference me swinging on him, which you could have flipped in to a punch, but you didn't.
Also, I bodied both Book and Rican.
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