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Most of the verse is GOAT tbh....

I would do a full breakdown but the Em haters won't care anyway...

His palms are sweaty knees weak arms are heavy

Palms/arms
sweaty/heavy
knees/weak

That almost every word rhyming in the first line and it all makes sense and is not forced....am I impressed....yes! Shoul you be? YES!

Remember we can look at how he did it lets not forget he's telling a story too.....

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reality/gravity
oh there goes
Do you understand the concept of rhyming?
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Originally Posted by Saxx View Post
Most of the verse is GOAT tbh....

I would do a full breakdown but the Em haters won't care anyway...

His palms are sweaty knees weak arms are heavy

Palms/arms
sweaty/heavy
knees/weak

That almost every word rhyming in the first line and it all makes sense and is not forced....am I impressed....yes! Shoul you be? YES!

Remember we can look at how he did it lets not forget he's telling a story too.....

---------- Post added at 04:00 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:58 PM ----------

Snap/back
to
reality/gravity
oh there goes
Do you understand the concept of rhyming?
 
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