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Unread 06-16-2014, 10:13 PM
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JimmyV: You got a loooottttt of personality bro. LOL I was diggin that shit, great presence on the mic, you make it sound like it's an every day thing to you. Some parts did sound a bit silly tho, i mean when you have other more naturally charismatic parts in the song, those lame spots stick out. The flow was nice (not really my style tho) but it was a bit spotty at times. I liked the lyrics for the most part. Also, i just gotta point out that i liked how you started by saying "tell em ima do it", then changed it to "i aint gonna do it" hehe Sometimes i enjoy the subtle things

Uhmazing: The laugh in the beginning was wayyyy too loud lmaooo! even tho i applaud you adding something extra to the beat, that shit can make somebody stop listening to a track and never go back to any of your other shit... just saying.. the flow was dope, this is more my style. I gotta say tho, the voice sounds contrived at times. Lyrics were hit and miss, like when you started talkin bout gyros and mayo, that kinda turned me off, but plenty of dope bars in there. multis were the strong point imo

Whitz: this track has the most "professional feel to it" out of the 3 tracks. The movie clips in the beginning were cool and all, but kinda pointless for this imo... idk i mean it is a track tourney so you gotta spice it up but maybe you could have chosen less random clips, something that added to a theme of the song. The flow in the second verse was reeeaalllll niiiice bro. chorus also has a catchy pro sound to it. Wasn't feeling the lyrics at all tbh, but as a track overall this shit was pretty damn good

MVGT Whitz
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Unread 06-16-2014, 10:13 PM   #10
 
Dirty Work
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JimmyV: You got a loooottttt of personality bro. LOL I was diggin that shit, great presence on the mic, you make it sound like it's an every day thing to you. Some parts did sound a bit silly tho, i mean when you have other more naturally charismatic parts in the song, those lame spots stick out. The flow was nice (not really my style tho) but it was a bit spotty at times. I liked the lyrics for the most part. Also, i just gotta point out that i liked how you started by saying "tell em ima do it", then changed it to "i aint gonna do it" hehe Sometimes i enjoy the subtle things

Uhmazing: The laugh in the beginning was wayyyy too loud lmaooo! even tho i applaud you adding something extra to the beat, that shit can make somebody stop listening to a track and never go back to any of your other shit... just saying.. the flow was dope, this is more my style. I gotta say tho, the voice sounds contrived at times. Lyrics were hit and miss, like when you started talkin bout gyros and mayo, that kinda turned me off, but plenty of dope bars in there. multis were the strong point imo

Whitz: this track has the most "professional feel to it" out of the 3 tracks. The movie clips in the beginning were cool and all, but kinda pointless for this imo... idk i mean it is a track tourney so you gotta spice it up but maybe you could have chosen less random clips, something that added to a theme of the song. The flow in the second verse was reeeaalllll niiiice bro. chorus also has a catchy pro sound to it. Wasn't feeling the lyrics at all tbh, but as a track overall this shit was pretty damn good

MVGT Whitz
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