I'm not impressed.. You aint shit.. I was going by "big names".. I think Jason sucks.. But yeah you havent accomplished shit here.. Others can clamp on to your ball sack all they want but at the end of the day, you've went no where bum..
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You beat reEFer with this verse..
ya BLASTIN da TOOLS? SO WUT. ur AVER-AGE, DUDE BLoWS NUTS!..HEAT SPARKS! I can be a SWEETHEART/Sweetart but i'd RATHER THIS "FRUIT ROLL UP!".. got HEAT tA SPRAY but if he "MEAT da BLADE" i'm HAVIN dis FOOL "COLD CUT!" when da CALIBUR's NeW SCOPE UP? HOLMEs ya LOST! Either/Ether ya CLOSE to GOD ..or you ACTUALLY KNEW "HoVA"!!! mah SPEECH, WEAKLIN? is HOT! so "BEAT ME, YOU WILL NOT" like da GRAMMAR I USE? YODA'S! Ima villain and you WhAT HERO...GOD??!? i EMPTY THANGS so fuck ya cool GRETZKY AIM.. i got SUB-ZERO's "ARMS"(FATALITY!) ur NOT GONNA WIN.. cuz wut i JOT WITH THE PEN? isn't FAIR FOR BOUTs I SPIT. so when i AIR eM OUT w/ "CLIPS"..??..call it "GAN(gone) w/ THE WIND!" Gan-ga belong in a BONG, or A PIECE, A DUTCH! he's HORRIBLE PLEASE, SHUT UP. Lyrically i'd PROBABLY OWN HIM! but if i "ROLL UP ON EM n SMOKE EM"?.. i'm SORRY FOR BEING "BLUNT"..
The only line that would have potential against any middle/heavyweight now is the cold cut line.. reEFer would destroy you now..
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Your verse against Mayneak had so many flaws in it..
its aBSURD, MAH QUOTES -- i ainna NERD, NOT, NOPE!! I can kill but I preFER ROBBED FOLKS! So it aint a "mystery" when ppl see me dey for SURE LOCK HOMES!(Sherlock Holmes)!!..dis LAME HOL WEIGHT? n you POP THOSE ROUNDS? lol ya K SO FAKE(Queso) we kno thas Na'CHO STYLE!!!(O_O
...i like bitches ery WEEK? SEX SKEEZAs..I aint "charmin" but you ain eva have a "CLEAN EX(Kleenex)" EITHER! oh you AT GYMS? you TAKE PUSSY? ..sike fAGGOT, go MAKE COOKIES! cuz the FACT IS you ain't have "ABS SINCE(Absence)" you PLAYED HOOKIE!..so you POSIN A THREAT? on phoTOS w/ CHROME, TOAST, n THE LED? haha! DIS FRAUDs PIX ARE(Pixar) ... "OVER THE HEDGE!" I'll "lay you out" like CLOTHES on YA BED! i'm NICE FUCK'uh! with LINES i'M DIVINE, a 9th WONDER!..think you "FLYer" w/ RHYMES? - yea "WRIGHT" BROTHER!(O_o
I came w/ fire like DRAGON FIGHT FABLES. look at DIS TEXT JERK tlkn bout he "DISH NET WORK"(Dish Network)..cool, you got SATELLITE CABLE( -__- )
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Nice ideas but bad wording and weak setups.. too much self talk but thats expected from you..
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Your bars against RULE were a step up from the others but RULE would body you now.. who CALLED IN SLAUGHTER? ...how he SKILLED TO YA'LL? "DEVILLE N BARS"(Da villain) only coincide if its LAW AND ORDER!! u WANT TO FATHOM holdin GLOCKS to BLAST EM!..Only way he'd "DODGE" this "MAGNUM"..is if he "BOUGHT A CHARGER!"...i'll BRUISE EM, BOX EM, SCAR HIM!!.think he'll HIT DIRECT w/ da TEXT MESSAGIN?..nah.."Ruler/RULE'AH OFF THE MARGIN!!" and i'm not tlkn INCORRECT MEASUREMENTS!!..you'll NEVER WIN, i'm TOO NICE!! ..and OFTEN HE MISTAKES IT, WELL ...nigga get OFF THE E, and TAKE AN L...cuz this "DEVIL" SENT TA (who?)..CHRIST!!!...Blasphemy! my RAPS KILLIN EM RIGHT?...if anybody Advil/ADD VILLE to THEIR LIFE it aint cuz he's CHILL, HOT, or BADNess..its PILL POPPIN ADDICTS!!...pfft GO TO SCHOOL..im daddy, i GIVE OUT PUNISHMENTS..no FOLKS CONFUSED cuz pre-battle dudes knew i was "OVER-RULE"..WITH-OUT JUDGE IN HIM!(Judging him)
wordplay sucks as usual though..