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Originally Posted by I JUST GOT ROBBED
the whole tourney is rigged,real talk..black book,send me a 16 after you get KOed by Oskar
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Alright, let's examine a good chunk of your verse.
To everyone TELLING THAT HE'S HARD-He has so much filler on a track so how is he a VETERAN WITH BARS,its like "hes preparing for a race"..He's "STRETCHING FROM THE START"(X_x)/
This is a decent concept cuz it's personal and I haven't seen it before. But look at the multies. Tell-ing That He's Hard, Vet-er-an With Bars, Stretch-ing From The Start. I mean Tellin That, Veteran, Stretchin From? Those rhyme? Nope. He's Hard, With Bars, The Start. I guess that works if you say the like thee instead of like da.
Im not 'pulling ya cards' but why did u copy DADDIO,HIS LINES or his SWAGGER IN YA RHYMES?Its not the first time we seen 'Black-Jack' so its a 'safe bet' to say hes known to "GAMBLE WITH HIS LIFE"!
Pulling Ya Cards/Black Jack/Safe Bet = Gamble With His Life? Wow, how original. Never seen anything like that before. Plus Black Jack is not an original nameflip ever. It's almost used as much as a Book Spine concept against me. Plus Dad-di-o His Lines, Swag-ger In His Rhymes, Gam-ble With His Life... Daddio, Swagger In, and Gamble With do not rhyme whatsoever. Like get the fuck out of here.
Joined 4 crews in a single year so i doubt this TRAITOR HAS FANS,If we ever see "Black add a homie in his circle",he'll end up being a "SNAKE IN THE GRASS"/
Honestly, don't even get this? What does Black add a homie in his circle have to do with a snake in the grass? Like what? And Trai-tor Has Fans rhymes with Snake In The Grass? Nope, good try though.
WHY U BRAG about the NINES U FLASH?Its "light work" once i 'torch him' when MY TWO "MAGS" "SLICE THROUGH BLACK"/
Bragging about how you beat me bar for bar? Like, this has no impact. It's not setup at all... At least you rhyme here. I don't get this punch either.
Well see Black-out when Ill be HITTING EM WIT A ROCKY JAB to get that "Strap on my shoulder" and "Black-belt,on my waist",u guys WITNESSING A "KARATE CHAMP"!!
Hey, this rhymes to except Jab and Champ... Ya fucked up there buddy. And Black belt doesn't make any sense in a double meaning. Like a karate Black belt but do you mean Black's belt? I don't have a belt. I haven't won anything lol. And then you connect all that to karate. Wow, you're original dude.
You truly did out-bar me here. Lol, you're ass kid. You ain't getting 16.