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Anonymous Poet 09-02-2011 11:16 AM

I 'Live My Life' when 'This is War' like 'The A-Team'
 



:cool::cool::cool:

FreezyCT 09-02-2011 11:38 AM

Live My Life - vocals arent level....they go up and down, like youre moving your head away from the mic at times...flow surprised me, in a good way...the quality different between the hook and your verses is hindering the overall track...breath count was good...your dubs were too loud...lyrics were good but nothing really special, with the concept - i expected more

This Is War - dubs or adlibs - not sure which - are way too loud...hook was nice...you sound very tense in your verses...relax a little and breathe...beat was hot, but didnt really fit you...on the bright side, you showed flashes of extreme emotion...made me get into the song more

A-Team - again, the dubs are killing it...vocals need to be leveled out and theres no emtion in your verse...sounds like you just read the lyrics and let it be...hook is great...RULE has a nice, laidback tempo for this...the difference between your verse and RULEs is the clarity, work on your annunciation...if we cant make out the words, the song is moot

keep it up

Anonymous Poet 09-02-2011 11:49 AM

Great stuff freezy...thanks for that

UnEtHıCaL 09-02-2011 12:59 PM

Open more chests than a pirate.....yeah.....original.

FreezyCT 09-02-2011 01:01 PM

big thing to keep in mind is that just because something is played on here, doesnt mean its played to everyone else

UnEtHıCaL 09-02-2011 01:06 PM

By that logic, I can just spit played lines that are always said in real life and say "Pffft, they arent old on here"

FreezyCT 09-02-2011 01:18 PM

not at all - theres a huge difference between mainstream played and letsbeef played...the fact you fail to see that doesnt surprise me tho

UnEtHıCaL 09-02-2011 01:26 PM

It's not it's own world. If somethings played, it's played.

Anonymous Poet 09-02-2011 01:32 PM

So if you werent on LB and heard of tht line would u think its played?

The answer is no

FreezyCT 09-02-2011 01:46 PM

the thing is tho, LB is essentially its own world...we hold ppl to such high standards (musically) that the average person would not be able to handle...if the average person could come up with half the concepts we see on here, then everyone would do music and i mean EVERYONE - and i dont mean the typical "everyones a rapper" saying...youre being simple minded right now, or oblivious


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