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Black Book 06-16-2011 05:44 PM

Black-Book vs. Herodotus...(My best battle wording wise)
 
Yeah, I always hear my wording sucks so I tried a new style to fix it.
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=400640
We need 5 votes!

Black Book 06-16-2011 06:20 PM

Bump . . . :high:

MAN DOWN 06-16-2011 06:28 PM

Before I read this, I think you're missing the point. Your style is fine, it's just sometimes it sounds like broken English, not slang, but they way you tie your rhyming words. :high:

Black Book 06-16-2011 06:34 PM

Yeah I know, but I meant a different wording style. I also cut out all the unneeded exlamations & stuff, cuz it takes up too much room.

MAN DOWN 06-16-2011 06:44 PM

Hard battle to judge....I'll drop a vote later. O.o and yeah the wording was better.


EDIT: I have an exclamation fetish.

Herodotus 06-16-2011 07:17 PM

Ahhhh shit, I put up a thread a minute ago.
Ahh well, double the advertisement.

I got a horrible exclamation fetish too.

Black Book 06-16-2011 07:38 PM

Haha. Still need 5 votes!

Black Book 06-16-2011 08:40 PM

Bump.......!

Black Book 06-17-2011 12:26 AM

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Lizman 06-17-2011 06:13 AM

Are You Radicalism?


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