Black-Book vs. Herodotus...(My best battle wording wise)
 

Yeah, I always hear my wording sucks so I tried a new style to fix it.
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=400640
We need 5 votes!

Bump . . . :high:

Before I read this, I think you're missing the point. Your style is fine, it's just sometimes it sounds like broken English, not slang, but they way you tie your rhyming words. :high:

Yeah I know, but I meant a different wording style. I also cut out all the unneeded exlamations & stuff, cuz it takes up too much room.

Hard battle to judge....I'll drop a vote later. O.o and yeah the wording was better.


EDIT: I have an exclamation fetish.

Ahhhh shit, I put up a thread a minute ago.
Ahh well, double the advertisement.

I got a horrible exclamation fetish too.

Haha. Still need 5 votes!

Bump.......!

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