Leave me criticism on my MUSIC VIDEO!
 

Leave me criticism or comments to improve.

A Lil too goofy for me. Sounds like you tried to hard for shock value. Delivery's a little choppy too. . Video was nicely shot though

But on the goofy thing. There's a market for every style these day's so keep doing ya thing

Thanks for the honest feedback. What could I do with my flow to make it less choppy? And thanks for the comment about the quality of the film!

It's a time & effort thing. The more time you spend rapping over beats the more you get to understand how to ride them and structure your written verses. Like with anything. it takes hours of practice

A personal method is I just freestyle random shit not paying attention to whats coming out of my mouth but focusing on my flow untill I find the right approach interms of delivery. Then I start to write based off that particular structure

Also on a side note: Your sound quality is nice. So you don't have to worry about that. Leaves more time to have fun & experiment & practice on your delivery

Okay, thanks for the helpful suggestions man. I appreciate your time.

Thumbs down for tyler the creator......the beat was dope yonkers was his best song he has no staying power....mf has song after song of garbage.......your video was decent and the rhymes were decent........keep at it....wasnt bad