LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!! the moment you've all been waiting for...
 

iight iight, a STOY original!! this one's actually me haha, this is an extremely rough cut tho, made from audacity and a Rock Band mic lmao... so dont bag on the quality. Also, it was just a 5 minute sketch put together, i still have work to do on it, but i'd appreciate just some critique and a lil advice on what i should do with it.
The beat is strictly me beatboxing and singing or w/e :)) haha
also, feel free to just tell me straight up that it sucks, cuz if it does i just won't go in this direction.
its more a test than anything, because i used a prewrit cypher on the beat...
just tell me what you think, much appreciated


im aware, the flow and delivery could be improved very much, this is just a rough cut..

put more work into it and i think it could sound cool