my first song
 

this is my first song i ever made so i hope yall like it:D and if somebody wanna do a song im down just hit me up:confused:

o yea comment & like if u feel me

deep shit dude!

Feeling your flow, need a better beat though.

Lyrics on the track are good but I'm not a fan of the beat. Some parts of the beat are good and some are too complex for a hip hop beat in my opinion. Its a good track overall though.

The Beat can be better. Lyrics is cool though

tha beat isnt that good, but its so hard 2 find a good beat now a dayz, and 4 ur 1st song or 1,000th song its always good 2 kno that u kan still make a decent song 2 a weak beat, so good beat or bad, its not like u got it for sale on itunes and r askin ppl 2 buy it... so dat shyt real koo