I'd like to get some of the more Inteligent, Talented peeps..
 

check it, i wrote this cypher.. i have almost an infinit amount of concepts for it, honestly, i believe i could've have made it a single scheme of 64 lines.. no doubt, however, i get lazy.. so the flow and quality probably would have fallen off, even tho the lyrics would have been iight.. so i decide to keep it shorter, its kind of a new style, not really.. but i wanna know if its good or bad, or iight.. just give me some feedback and some peeps.. id appreciate it

http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...on=tb&id=50081