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Prose_ 02-11-2011 06:53 PM

Concept Critique
 
"I Stay Cold" like his Gaze STARIN-UP ON ME so dont be so arrogant while you BLARIN-ALL COCKY! "His Gun's Shakin"! i think ya "Condition" FLARIN-UP HOMIE cause he cant "Grip Steel" like he got CEREBAL PALSY!!! this "Pussy Better Switch To Plan B" cause you cant stop THIS TIGHT FLOW! he's a "Constradiction" cause you got "Off Lines" when HIS SITES ON! no one gives a fuck when this bitch "FIST FIGHT" HOES cause "Fanning Myself With His Notebook" the only way HIS RIGHTS BLOW!(writes/rights) he was "Smokin Joints" when he writ that and he still cant GET HITS IN! im like "Stomach Acid" cause i RIP BITT-ENS! his "Gats Are Inactive" and his GRIPS SIT IN cause his "Crosshairs" wouldnt "Drop Hot Clips" with LIT SPLIT ENDS! how the hell do you think you TOP NOTCH when i "Put the Fizzle In Him" with these "Crack Lines" like POP ROCKS cause ill wipe the floor with the bitch and when the MOP STOPS ima "Put the 1 and 2s On this Square" then "Jump His Ass" like HOPSCOTCH!!! CLASSICK!!!

Prose_ 02-11-2011 07:33 PM

uppppin.....


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