Vs. KRHYME KILLS!!!
 

ite i sent him 8 but he prob gonna merk my ass but whatevs. check my verse and give feedback.

ima SPARK-THE-TEXT and MARK-THIS-VET while the TARGET-WETS so Make Room for me like ARCHITECHS on the vets list! enSUE wit HIGH VOLTS! now ya CREWS SCREWED-IN-LIKE BOLTS! cause my Punch Kills them all like SUICIDE CULTS!/ dickridin on the ready. what are YALL? NEW JAGS? im like a cigarette truck the way i HAUL YOU FAGS! have this Vet Wrapped in Bad Threads like RULE SPRAWLED in RAGS! you the one Full Of Shit so why am i CALLED a DOUCHE BAG!/ he like a Crackhead cause he beg to GET MORE LINES! ya Too/Two Square! so i fucked girl for ya and HIT FOUR TIMES cause when you Step to Me ya Always SLip like WET FLOOR SIGNS!/ when im on the mic u get FRIDGET! AMP-SO-MEAN! sendin 8? ill Recieve the Mail but ill GET-IT STAMP-YA-TEAM cause when this "Heavyweight" Weighs in only the RIDGET GRAMSES-LEAN! fucked you! now Bounce Shorty like a MIDGET TRAMPOLINE!

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bump. really need some feedback yall.

chill son...i replied

I know you rushed the 8. It's good, but I've seen some better concepts from you. There's some good lines. Not many personals, besides the whole vet thing. I know it's hard to play on their level, especially when they dip and then come back. That Cigarette Truck line was funny. This would kill someone on the mid-level, but when you step to vets like KK, you gotta have some ammo, nah mean? Flex ya flow to put some personals and you be good.
You know I'm good with you A-thom, but you could tell you was eager to get something together.