... Help :) ... Someone Read, Important To All Textee's To Realise
 

..... As Well.....

Yep, Ok,' I Thought About It. After Reading Jason's Comment On JWall's Battle Yesterday, He Was Correct. And I Thought, Ok. Well. I Am In That Barrier (The 5 Barrier) But I Think Peeps Are Still Over-Rating Me. Yes, I Think So. I'm Assuming Back In The Day, As You Guys Say Which Was In 07-08, If I Was To Produce What I Produce Now In That Text Box, I Woulda' Straight Up Got 5's And 6's ... Seriously. So What I Want, And I'm Being Serious No Bull Shit Dick Shit W/e You Wanna Call It, I'mma Put Down A Verse Here, (The Best I Can Do, Seriously), And Hope To Get Honest Feedback ... Tell Me, Don't Be Afraid. Tell Me If Its Whack, Tell Me If Its Not Bad Tell Me If It's Good. Etc ... Also Rate It If Possible, But If You Do This Shit Please Positive Criticism. And I Ain't Gone Stop Till I Mastered It :D ....

Thanks

This WRITTEN’S WHERE MY PUNS ARE AIRED! Its natural, BLISSING THIS RIGHT ANSWER “THERE”! Whereas you “try so hard” it makes you seem you SHITTIN IN YOUR UNDERWEAR!!!!! This kid’ll soon be THIRSTIN FOR MEDICINE when I BURST HIS OWN TESTIMENT cos he was just a fake fuck and couldn’t be “original” if he was VERSIN A VETERAN!!!!/ It’s CERTAIN YOUR RELEVENT to only weak people like a PERSON OR RESIDENT!!! My SPITS ALL THAT CALLS and GIVES THOSE THAT STROLL a little taste of being taken over like “HYPO’S” AND TROLLS!!! (?) So your verse is my comp??? Please, this just a stroll for me like I put my KICKS ON AND BALL!!!!! I’m SONNIN’ EM’ FUCKIN COVENENT SUCKIN to have you “used quicker” than GOVERNMENT FUNDING!!!!! WASN’T IT MON-EY???? This TEENS STUPID, READ USELESS!! I just answered the “question” you no match to me, i’mma KEEN STUDENT!!!

Well, Its Not Really My Best Lol. I Kinda Rushed It Cos I Gottta Buzz Soon.

But Stay On Topic And Don't Be A Dick, You Know??? Show Some Maturity.

*Ps ... Hope Some Of You Peeps Realise It As Well.

Go count your pubes, dickface!

watch your mouth dale...but other than that i agree with this statement

This WRITTEN’S WHERE MY PUNS ARE AIRED! (what the fuck is you talkin about, I'm thru readin this bullshit)

Lol, What I Expected.

Too Many Multi Accounts Mastr.

Lol i'm not a multi. Just check our battle styles...dumbass

V LMAO check the post times. Oh shit riddle me that one!

Dale's not me and Robert has 6 people that log into him I believe :)

plain and simple you make no sense with your random words thrown together and your punchlines also make no sense but you throw out 5 exclaimation marks like you just dropped a killer punch

here.........for example (and we've been over this before....i know)

!!!!! I’m SONNIN’ EM’ FUCKIN COVENENT SUCKIN to have you “used quicker” than GOVERNMENT FUNDING!!!!!

"i'm sonnin' em' fuckin covenent suckin"..............it makes absolutely no sense

"used quicker than government funding"........to my knowledge organizations who receive government funding don't use the money any quicker than any other money they have

and to top all that off, I'M SONNIN' EM' FUCKIN COVENENT SUCKIN (whetever that means) has 25 extra syllable thrown in before it can match GOVERNMENT FUNDING as a multi

and thats just one tiny little line i critiqued so you get the picture

^^^absolutely agreed. multis are mad sloppy syllable wise but worst of all is it makes little sense - or at best its too stretched. Don't try so hard to come up with 18 syllable multis and focus more on a solid rhyme with decent structure. peace.