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EJT 07-22-2010 04:15 PM

EJT's first track in 2 years
 
[media]http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=83784-I-649[/media]

leave feedback on the track page,

Amethyst is on first verse,
i'm on second verse

RULE 07-22-2010 04:16 PM

THATS why u got exclusive hahaha!

Peepin now...

remarK 07-22-2010 04:45 PM

aiiight E, I can tell you don't do tracks too much and you can definitely improve on the mic presence, projection & style/swagger but thats how it is for everyone..

one or two more tracks and you'll find a certain medium.. this shit was dope tho IMO..

I'm hoping your the second dude.. lmao

nah the 2nd dude was nice, but the first had better content which is why I thought it was you.. "Like Bob Marley and Lennon before they passed away" ... uh!, hells yes

RULE 07-22-2010 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by remarK (Post 480779)
aiiight E, I can tell you don't do tracks too much and you can definitely improve on the mic presence, projection & style/swagger but thats how it is for everyone..

one or two more tracks and you'll find a certain medium.. this shit was dope tho IMO..

I'm hoping your the second dude.. lmao

nah the 2nd dude was nice, but the first had better content which is why I thought it was you.. "Like Bob Marley and Lennon before they passed away" ... uh!, hells yes

Just yes^

Mark said it all.

remarK 07-22-2010 04:51 PM

actually it makes sense that your the second dude cuz he had waay batter multis..

but I enjoyed the first verse more.. probably cuz he had 2x the bars lmao

Jack-0-Lantern 07-22-2010 04:54 PM

Flow could be a little better, but that's just the inexperience. Aswell as the delivery, and pressence. Be more fluent, and comfortable while you're spitting, and you should start to zero in on what you're trying to do.

remarK 07-22-2010 04:57 PM

you should change this thread to:

Track Therapy with....... SV

EJT 07-22-2010 05:00 PM

haha, big thanks mark,

check out the second one,

i'm on first verse, he's on second

[media]http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=83784-Birds-666[/media]

EJT 07-22-2010 05:01 PM

and thanks to everyone else

EJT 07-22-2010 05:54 PM

uppin' for feed

will post the 3rd later tonight


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