Exlusive battles... NEEDS VOTES!!!
 

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=328933
Prime_Tastic Vs IAmFlow ^ This one needs 1 to close

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=329142
Red_Myst Vs IAmFlow ^ This one has no votes!!

Bump Bump Bump

I am no longer exclusive...but i had already expo'd....for what its worth

IAF 7 Red Myst 7

IAF: opener had some serious awkward wording there in the first multi, punch was a decent concept, but not really played out well enough to hit hard. urninary tract infections concept was pretty clever, lead in was average though, NYT line wasnt coherent, as him being "red through" isnt really an attack; closer wasnt at all hitting hard. RED: opener had a decent concept, but the multies were off, interrupting the flow, and the punch could have been worded better for greater impact. i liked the Revenge of the Nerds line, lol...good personal. KY line was funny as shit, but agian, the wording and multies were way off, but comedic effect was nice as shit..closer had a nice personal, but multies were off. I can tell that either someone is working with you or you've been working on this yourself. your back to back multies are pretty tight, but then some are off...good improvement, man. OVERALL: lackluster from one, improvement from the other has these two meeting in the middle. close shit here. FVC Bitch

^ thanx for the breakdown krhyme
just noticed this lol!!
apreciate much ;D

still needs the votes.. on both battles!!! I wanna get these closd

yea, cant vote ya other one cause Im not exclusive anymore. which also means that the private exclusive is off too. but next time we both online, I'll send it basic

ight that's cool prime ;D

well we're both here. you want it now?

And Again The Exclusives Need To Be Closed!!!