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Broken multies?
If ya feelin-low needin-dough...im like a GENIE WIT REQUESTS but pay that back, or this tech hit-flesh & that'll REALLY LEAVE a MESS cuz once its “S-Owe-S” ya best-beLIEVE HES in “DISTRESS”!
"ACTION? -ASK YA WHORE "Pull Up When Ya At Work"... she fly outta bed -starts DASHIN DOWN a FLOOR im wavin' my boxers like a PRACTICED MATADOR!..Pipe-it, now she a "Porch-Pirate" way she "Take The PACKAGE AT THE DOOR"" Do these have broken multies? |
No, but DOWN is way off from ASK, MAT and AT.
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Because they don't rhyme in any way? DOWN is too strong a word for this.
Same with the LEAVE in the first rhyme. That one goes LEAVE - IN - WIT. Leave is the word that's too powerful there to not have a rhyme. |
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Neither one of those bars have broken multis.
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Personally I find lower casing shit like that to be really annoying.
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GENIE WIT REQUESTS = REALLY LEAVE , MESS = LIEVE HES, “DISTRESS” The way that looks to me is 5, 4, 5, even though I can assume the "a"s and "in" are emphasized, and apart of the scheme. They must be capped to show placement and emphasis for a smoother read. |
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