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TKtheGREAT 01-22-2020 05:40 PM

Broken multies?
 
If ya feelin-low needin-dough...im like a GENIE WIT REQUESTS but pay that back, or this tech hit-flesh & that'll REALLY LEAVE a MESS cuz once its “S-Owe-S” ya best-beLIEVE HES in “DISTRESS”!


"ACTION? -ASK YA WHORE "Pull Up When Ya At Work"... she fly outta bed -starts DASHIN DOWN a FLOOR im wavin' my boxers like a PRACTICED MATADOR!..Pipe-it, now she a "Porch-Pirate" way she "Take The PACKAGE AT THE DOOR""

Do these have broken multies?

EtH 01-22-2020 05:41 PM

No, but DOWN is way off from ASK, MAT and AT.

TKtheGREAT 01-22-2020 05:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EtH (Post 1195319)
No, but DOWN is way off from ASK, MAT and AT.

Why not? Because I'm supposed to assume the "a"s are emphasized?

EtH 01-22-2020 05:45 PM

Because they don't rhyme in any way? DOWN is too strong a word for this.

Same with the LEAVE in the first rhyme. That one goes LEAVE - IN - WIT. Leave is the word that's too powerful there to not have a rhyme.

RULE 01-22-2020 05:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TonganKidd (Post 1195316)
If ya feelin-low needin-dough...im like a GENIE WIT REQUESTS but pay that back, or this tech hit-flesh & that'll REALLY LEAVE a MESS cuz once its “S-Owe-S” ya best-beLIEVE HES in “DISTRESS”!


"ACTION? -ASK YA WHORE "Pull Up When Ya At Work"... she fly outta bed -starts DASHIN DOWN a FLOOR im wavin' my boxers like a PRACTICED MATADOR!..Pipe-it, now she a "Porch-Pirate" way she "Take The PACKAGE AT THE DOOR""

Do these have broken multies?

Nope no broken multis on either.

TKtheGREAT 01-22-2020 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EtH (Post 1195323)
Because they don't rhyme in any way? DOWN is too strong a word for this.

Same with the LEAVE in the first rhyme. That one goes LEAVE - IN - WIT. Leave is the word that's too powerful there to not have a rhyme.

I didnt mean for the "down" rhymes scheme...its not the point of this, I was askin about the lowercase "a"s.

Locchart 01-22-2020 05:49 PM

Neither one of those bars have broken multis.

EtH 01-22-2020 05:50 PM

Personally I find lower casing shit like that to be really annoying.

Locchart 01-22-2020 05:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TonganKidd (Post 1195325)
I didnt mean for the "down" rhymes scheme...its not the point of this, I was askin about the lowercase "a"s.

The lowercase a's are still a part of the rhyme scheme, whether they're capped or not.

TKtheGREAT 01-22-2020 05:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE (Post 1195324)
Nope no broken multis on either.

Even when it goes from

GENIE WIT REQUESTS = REALLY LEAVE , MESS = LIEVE HES, “DISTRESS”

The way that looks to me is 5, 4, 5, even though I can assume the "a"s and "in" are emphasized, and apart of the scheme. They must be capped to show placement and emphasis for a smoother read.


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