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So I got called "biased and one dimensional" because I didn't pick a battler as the winner so i told her that id post it here so that we get a wide range of opinions.

Battler 1 verse-

See nat , fuck Marco I'm the "king of this jungle" you couldn't RUMBLE THY 'KING' , and last night you were "sailing high tides" like a HUMBLE VIKING , and she said her "smile was across borders" ..that's a "HUNDRED MILE GRIN" , and in this battle ? You should've "ghosted" if you really wanna get "UNDER MY SKIN"!

Like every other chick she'll squirm under my touch when I'll rub her with this NICE GENTLE HAND , while I'm "pulling the wood under her ass" like a NICE GENTLEMAN !! ( get it? Wood/Chair?)

And like every other chick she love shopping so I'll hand "nat tee's"(natty) but she isn't WITTY OR SMART , cause nat was "passing through the poles" like the "meRIDIAN ARC"! She said my touch was "electrifying her body" with over a BILLION SPARKS , and we know the "heat was hitting the target" like aiming 'HELIUM DARTS' , and saying she keeps her "rhymes in her heart" is the only time we'll see that this "TITTY GOT BARS"!!

Battler 2-

While Hank CELEBRATES HIS VICTORY OVER X he should ask Y he accepted the call like a HOE FOR PREMEDITATED SEX, did his balls grow a tad, FOE X WAS AN EASY CONQUEST? Rack em up, [balls] I guess he's not PLAYING HIS CARDS CLOSE ENOUGH TO HIS CHEST,
The X-Factor [win] DIDN'T SEE HIM A RAISE AT TQS

So FUCK YO FEELINGS [FYF]I'M LEAVING SCARS, fronting another crew like he's the SECOND CUMMING, this 'Hitman' didn't even Mount Venus, he was busy LURKING ON MARS, for a cocky 'bas'sid' that's like him maccing Tim's Gunn REACHING FOR STARS
Now he's claiming wins BEFORE THE FACT like HE'S TOM'S BRAT, a 'hollow'gram FIT FOR THIS 'KING' when I hand him his ASS IN A SLING

Is that SURPRISE ON YOUR FACE that I CUT TO THE CHASE? When I CHANGED THE STAKES and GLOVES GOT DISPLACED? LEAVES A BAD TASTE?
You have more than Jeremy's £100k steak at stake cos I'M OFF IN TOP GEAR, my punch's cost more than 'hope', lets MAKE THAT CRYSTAL CLEAR
BAM! That's FEAR FACTOR I HEAR, CRINGING IN YOUR EAR!

It won't cost me 50 cent to chew and spit this M&M handing him a 'sweet' double L!

Expos

#FyF - his second crew
#Hitman - his previous aka
#Tim Mckenzie Gunn - gay celeb, mac means to manipulate also Mc is his middle name
#Tom's brat - Tom Hanks
#Hollogram of a King - movie featuring Hanks
#Hank bragged on posts that the pic of 50 Cent, Eminem and LL Cool J was of him [Eminem], Marco and Kalani http://i67.tinypic.com/mwut8y.jpg



Just choose the battler who you think won in the poll.

wow.. both bars werent that good.. 1st battler tho is the winner, better conceptual punches, and better multils.. 2nd battler was terrible.. mismatched everywhere.

thanks fammo, i voted for the first battler too. The second battler was quick to pull the "you are bias, you should re read your votes" card lol. I told her if you need to explain your bars with a thousand expos after you get voted against, you shouldn't write a verse to begin with.

First guy got this. Neither was great but the first had a better understanding of how to try to execute conceptually and rhyme more than one syllable.