@Quincy® vs @Lightsaber
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Originally Posted by Quincy® (Post 1087159) And this is voodoo I suppose. ---------- Post added at 09:49 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:26 PM ---------- @NOBLE this is voodoo correct?

Between Life and Death

To a convict behind bars life is a bummer,
'cuz it doesn't even shine hard when it's summer/
there's this guy and he utters, "divine star in the sky; in a cluster,
i think I can beat discharge (this charge) although, he died like a buster,
man, life's shitty that's why ours; flies in a dumpster/
it precipitates while it eliminates/
when it rains it pours and it disintegrates,
and dribbles as it passes off that trick'll (trickle) surprise many/
analysts or biologists, 'cuz really that's time shifting/
see, science is magical; it can silence n flatter u,
but life has it's up and downs, and it's violence can shatter u/
I know two wrongs don't make a right, that's why we're left lyin like latitude/
I define it as graphical, but anyways, I'm that guy with the attitude/
You should already know that, but I still wave to the sky/
in your honor that I still to this day am alive,
but will u explain how am i to raise and to rise/
when I'm down and in pain as water drains from my eyes/
I can't picture the photosynthesis when I can't even drive/
myself without a gas pedal (petal) to create nuclei/
I know it's only right I have to pay for the crime,
but explain to me why my prayers go unanswered, is our savior a lie?
Why must he play with my mind, but it's okay, I'll be fine, Jehovah/
I hope it aches when these lines evoke ya to basically try n notice/
that he deserved what he got, because he raped my daughter/
at first you'll be like, if u don't have faith why bother?
Well, death can't be altered; life is unpleasantly awkward/
and i say that in Your name; oh, Heavenly Father." -Amen