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ATT Round 1: Writer 4 vs. Writer 29 (Double N/S, but Writer 33 advances)
Writer 4 vs. Writer 29 Rules Verses are due Monday, June 23rd. Verses are to be sent to Wonderbred via Private Message. There are NO EXTENSIONS. Verses must be 20-30 lines long. Voting is 3-0 KO or First to 5. Topic #8 “He who loves with purity considers not the gift of the lover, but the love of the giver.” -Thomas A. Kempis |
I know the title is confusing. Basically both writers no-showed so a guy who missed the sign-ups wrote a verse for it and gets to advance.
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Writer 33 Unconditional Love The first day I met her, I was at the cafe getting some fine food She was bussin' the tables in raggedy clothes and sun-dried shoes But somehow I looked at her and just marveled her numb life Was it her long brunette hair or eyes that sparkle in sunlight? Her dedication, her resilience, or all her hardworking days For some low-end tips and a paycheck below minimum wage So one day I got the courage to ask her on a date with me She was stand offish, and surprised when I made the plea But she said; "Yes, we can give it a try and grab a coffee" "That sounds great, here tomorrow morning" I replied softly. And here we are today, we've been together for twenty years yeah we had our differences, family deaths, we shed plenty tears I offered her the world, a nice house and luxury cars, the good life A Healthy Diet, Brand Name clothes, anything she would like After all this time, she still never wanted a dime She stayed true, and never became daunted and primed It was never about the money, never about the easy livin' Or not being hungry, or having anything that was freely givin' She was this one in a kind ace; A pure beautiful angel A heart, no matter how aged, was youthful and graceful No matter what I had to give her, it was superficial and dumb Any other person would have found it irresistible stuff But was she gave back was unimaginable, It was the best gift of all. What she gave me back… Was unconditional love. Writer 4 = Nerrison Writer 29 = TheDarkness Writer 33 = IAmFlow |
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