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What's the key to making setups?
Any tips on how to lay down some dope set-ups followed by a boombastic punchline? please! :popcorn:
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become smart enough not to use "boombastic"
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Relevance.
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The key? Joining a crew that's run by me instead of @Punk. ;)
Anyway, I know this doesn't help right now but in the next week or so I should have an in depth video up at least on how to write punchlines. Probably setups later. So keep an eye out if you're still having troubles in a bit. |
Don't use an axe scent.. speak very fluent instead.. or we'll smell it from a mile away & you won't be the sharpest tool in the shed...
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@Obey said what i was about to.. but he was missing a "." at the end
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Come up with the rhymes first then the set up...so for example if you know cat & bat rhyme...Fill up the margin with a set up until you reach the word Cat, do the same thing on the next line with Bat
Blah blah blah i dont fuck with this cat/ Blah blah blah blah blah blah like a bat/ |
First, come up with a phrase, syan "GRAMMAR SCHOOLS" now find another multi like it, say.."MANNER'S TOO", Now join them up like --
This Guy? Shit's Pants & Ain't Got No MANNERS TOO / Ya'll See Him Fail And Get Marked In GRAMMAR SCHOOLS/ That's how it works, but be sure to get the multies down first. |
Or instead of joining Donos weakness you could get with the heavyweights if you play your cards right :D.. Like obey said relevance.. You wanna create a metaphor or reference that relates to your multie in your punchline or vice versa.. Theres more to it though but thats all you get for now..
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THANKS alot guys/. imma take dis precious bits of knowledge an' wisdom from the pros :'3 :pimp:
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