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OSKAR 09-03-2013 06:21 PM

Thousand Words (Murda Musik Diss)
 

Fidel Z 09-03-2013 06:25 PM

Finally! LEGGO

AfterThought 09-03-2013 06:29 PM

I'm proud of you, you actually rhymed most of the time.

But sorry to let you know you remind me of Bnas on this, it honestly got too boring after the 3rd minute and that's when I paused.

Stay up for the diss back.

On a sidenote: Did I just hear "Fuckin negro"?? the fuck??

Hubert Cumberdale 09-03-2013 06:29 PM

ACs!

Now THAT'S how you diss an entire crew MM.

Row 09-03-2013 06:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EtH (Post 946141)
ACs!

Now THAT'S how you diss an entire crew MM softly.

yea get em OSKAR

AfterThought 09-03-2013 06:37 PM

THAT's how you diss an entire crew MM without having to rhyme!

Anyway, enough talk, murder time.

RULE 09-03-2013 06:41 PM

Nice track, good to hear a nice long song with just BARS.

Still got a kinda major issue with your delivery. You slur words alot and your diction is very bad at time. Basically i found it hard to make out what you were saying most of the time.

That main issue aside (it is quite a bit issue tho) i thought otherwise the track was solid man. The quality was good, the delivery (tone-wise) was good too, and the bars i could make out had some sting in them. The poor diction REALLY affected the impact tho. Big time.

Holla!

Shezso Eu 09-03-2013 06:45 PM

better than Letum's drop. but the weak flow, lack of punches and off-beat delivery missed like hell.. its murda time! ;)

note: your quick rap switchups are pretty bad, breathe control needs work. and um, that lisp.. Eth Jr..? lol. this bout to be fuuuuuuun!

OSKAR 09-03-2013 06:45 PM

Lmfao at proud of u... It was a pain in the ass to record and thanks for the pointers rule. Hope u respond soon AT

OSKAR 09-03-2013 06:46 PM

Tana talkin bout lack of flow. I can die in peace


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