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Cloud Knight 02-10-2013 07:15 PM

Death 2 Chris 101 Exposed Diss Track (video)
 
101chris sent shots at me with this

^ pathic i trashed his whole image and exposed em here it is



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see chris 101 is a looser,false gimmick.
false flag, white surrending false image.
he think's he's a gangsta,a wanna b.
yeah i seen the pic of your four loco dawg.
you an't even up too me.
Level, my shits so krazy it will tremble.
yo qulity so ass da bass won't tremble.
sorry but you don't spit lyrics so raw as me.
il tear u off the metal with jaws in sea.
i'm going in, the flow is so sickining.
Cloud Knight, I'm your new crack addiction.
all you wanna do is check my letsbeef profile.
even had your chick to hate vote on all my battles.
(pause)
i'll run ya property kinda like monopoly.
an't nothing stopping me, no obsitcals.
obviously,i'm iceolated at a third degree.
i'll burn ya body lyricaly and then its phisycaly.
your gonna need surgery, and il prove ur not real.
at all,you an't real chris 101 is so cotton soft.
stuffed like a cotton ball,better fricken knock it off.
cause il do a fatality and rip ya spinal cord outta ya.
body, your temperment is kinda naughty like ur girl is.
in the bedroom, cause she's really fricken naughty.
i'm sicker with the flow, im an addiction i know u know.
cause you wanna have my name everywhere,even on your.
youtube videos,and on your twitter profile so everybody knows.
Cloud Knight Merks Em Down,with limbo's and daggers.
jag a warp like its pix & axel.
But you an't really here for the battle !
you just here just to claim your "fame" of "hypeness"
well guess what ?,Me & you is white so theres no "fame".
in the "hype" kid!
RIP THIS ~!!! rip your spinal out, i bet you like this.
then i'll put a cusion cotton pillow in ya mouth.
to bite this!,you dispise my lines cause they just so sick
psycotic prick with dime lines and real shit !
i'm a real kid, if i ever spit thee embrasements you put out.
i'd Probably Get Killed Quick! i'm the one that's gonna chop down.
i'll put the stomp down like the rock! Showdown !.
you is nothing but your only going down, your a one hit wonder.
yong jock it's going down !

---------- Post added at 07:15 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:14 PM ----------

@101CHRIS

Streetz De Hood 02-10-2013 07:38 PM

Trust me, nobody cares about this but you.

Cloud Knight 02-10-2013 07:39 PM

lmao i like ur style blunt and to the point

Streetz De Hood 02-10-2013 07:54 PM

lol just sayin

Cloud Knight 02-10-2013 08:06 PM

would like some feedback though :D

TheAnonP 02-10-2013 08:11 PM

first beat go hard.

You had some presence but I do believe your approach was wrong on this beat.

Your lyrical game was lacking...If this is a diss then you should come hard end to finish..You barely had any lines with the 'wooo factor'

Flow was choppy most of the time.

Don't like the fact that the first beat paused and then a new one entered. I think you should have gone with the first beat throughout.

In the second beat, I could barely hear what ya said cause the gunshots sounded more than your vocals...

Cloud Knight 02-10-2013 08:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by OSKAR (Post 888225)
first beat go hard.

You had some presence but I do believe your approach was wrong on this beat.

Your lyrical game was lacking...If this is a diss then you should come hard end to finish..You barely had any lines with the 'wooo factor'

Flow was choppy most of the time.

Don't like the fact that the first beat paused and then a new one entered. I think you should have gone with the first beat throughout.

In the second beat, I could barely hear what ya said cause the gunshots sounded more than your vocals...

thanks, i tryed to mix it better in the second verse but the gunshots were too loud they came with the instrumental, and i didn't want to make my vocals to loud where it hurts the ears of the listener's
thanks for the advice thats what i need to keep elevating. & improving.

TheAnonP 02-10-2013 08:15 PM

no doubt fam..Keep making tracks

Cloud Knight 02-10-2013 08:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by OSKAR (Post 888227)
no doubt fam..Keep making tracks

word up ever want me to spit on some track or feel like collaborating
hit me up i'm always down.


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