Need a couple opinions on my first verse..
 

Seems like my chat on here never works; Either nobody is ever online or it just doesn't show them to be online.

Anyway.. My homie n me were just fuckin' around recording some bars over 'Rack City' Instr. and I got the first verse done (and the hook but haven't mixed it yet) - A couple people I know have peeped it and said it was dope but I need some opinions from people who actually make music.

It's on soundcloud so if someone can give it a listen n tell me what you think i'd appreciate it, kinda rusty since I ain't done shit for over a year lol

https://soundcloud.com/search?q=burny%20first%20verse

By the way don't mind the name of the track.. My homie insists on calling me Burny for some reason haha.. Got that old ass grandma nickname n shit.

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EDIT: Oh and I understand my voice might be abit too loud, Im'a fix that soon.

LOL at old lady name, but give me a minute I'm gonna plug in an peep it

Cool appreciate it man.

And now that I listened to it on some decent speakers I really do need to turn the vocals down; Can hardly hear the beat at some points.

yea I liked this a lot, but as always when I listen to somebody with an english accent I don't get into it/understand it as much but with that being said I guarantee people from around you will dig this shit a lot no doubt at all.

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I listened to them on some good speakers and I thought the vocals were nice, Ithink you are just sensitive to your own voice/more critical on it you know notice it more.

maybe turn them down a tiny bit but I liked them loud being able to understand them

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yea turn them down a very tiny amount I like them loud listening again

Word, thanks fam. It's a good job a large majority of Lb are actually British hahaha

yea I'm starting to notice that more and more haha