StoyMilk's first track. Adice wanted.
 

Here's my 2 feedback linkers:
--> laughed my ass off @ this one.

anyways. This is my first recorded track, thats not my brother lol. He let me use his mic so I downloaded audacity & did a quick recording. Not going to lie is sketchy af. I would like to edit it and all that shit but i have NO clue how to do that. So feedback on the track is very appreciated if you check it out. & any advice on editing or even my rapping is wanted too. No doubt. I have a lot to learn.
Lol, I sounded weird...understand it was the first time I was recording that shit so I was trying to sound original & it got awkward but yeah. Feedback & advice please. Thank you broskies!

The mix is rough but clean. work on how you end your verses to up that cadence. that was really the only stand out flaw minus a few niggles. 3rd verse sounded way louder than the previous 2. i liked the "so what do i DO" part the way you worked the sample. you really went in. especially for your first song . it wasn't perfect but that's nit picking considering. get your mixing right and you'll be laughing. you got a dope voice and flow. the writing is cool to.

This was decent thought you concentrated more on Multies than you did with Delivery I would practice with less multies and a little bit more Delivery until you get to where you get in your Comfort Zone......

Thank you man! I really appreciate it.
I'll work on that shit. Thanks again bro, means alot.

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That makes sense man, I feel you. Definitely. Thanks bro! I really appreciate it man

kendrick...instantly the first thing that came to my mind...i don't know if this is your first track but if it is, wow...you ride the beat extremely well, hit the pauses nicely - lol at this point, id actually question this being your first track...you found something you sound natural at man, you need to run with this...only thing you need to focus on is the presence

Fuck you if this is your first track.

:(

Good shit dude. Like others said, there's a few mixing problems (not that I'm one to talk about mixing) and your presence could be upped a bit. But all in all, it's pretty good.