New heree
 

I use to come on this site years ago, don't even remember what my username was. But lately ive been trying to record with a friend but all his shit got stolen so i'm on here to write/battle whatever till the situations better. Here some lil light work I wrote in a few minutes to wipe the dust off. I tried copying the way you guys write bars but that shits corny and would sound terrible on a real track but heres my attempt...

Don't fuck with me leave you SHAKEN AND FEARFUL
Put the clip to the side of your dome have you TAKIN A EARFUL
He queer though, you aren't nowhere near hoe
You just mad I got the GAME ON LOCK
or maybe cause I gave your DAME THE COCK
leavin this pety lil LAME IN SHOCK
Don't make me aim and pop
And if you think we the same we not
But this is just that 'LIGHT WORK'
Point somebody worthy out I MIGHT MURK
Hit him with a tight verse
then drive off in that NICEE HEARSE'
Where the fuck is the real competetion?
hittin you with this hard steal composition
Yes it's written but it only took a minute
I came here to straight win shit
None of you cats got bars I feel
Compare your flow to cars I steal
behind a keyboard actin like you are that real
Lately ive been on a path of destructin
Half the time drugged out can't funtion
Passin around mad dutches
Eating these pussies like lunches
Who really can touch this?
Dudes on here be frontin like they the hottest
I just look at them like you know i got this
chillin fuckin a brazilian goddess
You should try being modest
How you real and barely honest
I'm the lyrical master
begining a new chapter
kill a verse and you after
and do it with laughter
The monster causing disaster
The names J-Ski and aint nobody can play me
now all you fakes go back to spittin gayly

Kind of weak first time I wrote in a min but thats why i'm on here.

you got the basic style there and its seems to me you know what multies are which is good since u are not entirely new to this.

Pm if u want so I can tell you some things u should do to become more 'complex'

im not nicee as oskar/

1. this is a battle sight. if you l ooking toi throw post an open

2. non-battle related, cypher section

3. and tbh, your story sounds stupid and like bull shit lol, your friends recording equipment got bowed.. and thought "I'll find an internet site an post them on there!" . . .

:rolleyes:

lol you're an idiot, and can't even spell get a 2nd grade education before you try to disrespect me. And lmaooo I don't got to explain shit to you, i wouldn't have a reason to lie though.

i posted that from my phone last night #GONZO

butt if your recording ish got stolen wouldn't that include your computer? and your next venture wouldn't be feedback from an internet site, it'd be time to get back on the grizzy

#whatdontbreakaniggamakeanigga

It wasn't my shit it was my boys, and his computer and tv did get stolen lol

#NIGGA:mad: