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Hometown


any listen/rate appreciated.

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@Just C and @Phil Banks

how do i post my track in my sigy without it coming up as a link

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rates appreciated lbers of bordom

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prefer fatt rails but heres a

BUMP.

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the soft spokenness is nice at the beginning - accents the intro...youre making improvements on the presence man, it definitely shows, keep it up...remember to just let it all out, dont worry about who hears you or whos listening...lol put on a show for them...as you went on, the energy picked up, and picked up the song with it as well...good job man, big step up from the battles...keep going

glooks on all aspects fam

REALLY appreciated

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I think you should mix the vocals up a little bit more, the beat over powers them a little

the flow sounds good but you can def improve it practice makes perfect though I def enjoy the track, just hard to focus on it.

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