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Clash of Eras: Verity vs. Dono
Verity vs. Dono Clash of Eras: Topical Battle House rules apply, contact me with any questions. The line limit for this topical battle is 40-60 lines. (Any adjustments must be decided upon by both participants and confirmed by Teek within 24 hours). Topic: Against One's Will (40-60 Lines) (Contestants have 24 hours to contact me via this thread if they agree this image should be replaced, you will only get one chance. ) http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z...ontopical2.jpg Check in By: August 24th 12 A.M.. Left Sends To Right By: August 31st 11:59 P.M. Right Must Reply By: September 1st 11:59 P.M. First to 5 or 3-0 K.O. Voting Rubix Rhyming Scheme/Flow Vocabulary Topic/Meaning Storytelling/Progression Emotion Imagery Poetic Techniques Ending |
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Oh shit, forgot to check
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2 of the best topical battlers on the site along with the 2 DPS champs....... and the exiled Scotsman.
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Yo what happened to me and dono's topical battle? lol I dont see it anywhere. Anyways goodluck to both , should be dope
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http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z...ontopical2.jpg 'Against One's Will' He never wanted this, but it was the only option A place he visited before but hadn't been to often His ears moved as tears oozed from his distraught toddler Plenty of thought fodder, any child would have got bothered It was not proper for a youth to see such a scene Fists curled tight as vices on the shirt he clutched between Reluctantly carried the boy from the hospital wing Away from his grandfather's corpse and sad thoughts it'd bring While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time Preparing the curtain, it was scary for certain Could he carry the burden and bury a person? Letting him live meant daring to worsen the illness But his parent's perpetual pain proved worse than a stillness Pops would rarely talk, so weak he could barely cough All his best traits and personality had been carried off Merely a shadow of a shell of his former self No trace of the radiant, positive man from warmer health He stood above his father, thoughts clear as muddy water Murder was murder, be it benign or bloody slaughter Plus, this was the man who raised him through taboo phases Tattoo crazes, and led him out of bad move mazes He could relieve the worst mess, there for his birth, fresh The first breath, and what was he bestowing in return? Death? His heart felt heated as burnt flesh so he mentally stalled Grasping for alternatives but necessity called The son bawled, you could almost watch nerves tearing The old man was suffering more than worth bearing Leaned down and pulled the plug, more than a metaphor Sleep, forever snore, dad ceased to breathe; nevermore While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time Years ago, tears flow, father and son, each across the table Speech is lost - disabled, discussion reaching thoughts of fatal Father hosted a brain parasite, simple medical fate No refunds, one way ticket to a vegetable state The son refuses, what he's asking is impossible Barely audible, his denial wasn't acting as an obstacle Pretending it's optional doesn't change the evidence Forgetful now, few years left by saintly estimates The old man spoke "When I pass the point of no return Don't let me slowly burn, be firm, and end my term I am no worm or germ, but I have reached the end When speech is bent, unite me with the preacher's men While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time" |
@Dono I just caught this. Been off here a few days. Really nice verse.
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if this is a still open battle my bad... I gave some feed......
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